Feedback From Proposal

My feedback was good, however they believed I needed more under standing on where my chapters were heading and what I was planning to do with the unconventional materials within the book.

I need to work out what each chapter was going to be and how they would all link in some way.

I think I want them to start from light beautiful images and start to get darker and more disturbed.

Chapter 1 - Feathers and Butterflies

•                          Butterfly on lips
•                          Iridescent net, model underneath with butterflies on top
•                          Throwing up feathers - inspiration from a snapchat filter
•                          Headpiece with bird head and feathers
•                          Wings on back made from safety pins - inpso VS Wings 

Chapter 2 - Nature and Flowers 

•                         Flowers all over the body 
•                         Figure to look like a statue with moss growing over it
•                         Straw bun and straw eyebrows 

Chapter 3 - FUN 

•                          Bubbles 
•                          Slime 
•                          Silly String
•                          Glitter

Chapter 4 - Technology and Metal 

•                          Data chip board 
•                          Screw beard
•                          lying on springs 

Chapter 5 - Gothic 

•                          Skulls 
•                          candles 
•                          Barbwire 

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Where to go from here - 

Do a few test shoots on certain looks 

Work out how they can all related and flow in some way 

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